Edition Details:
Format : E-book
Page Count: 17
ASIN:B07SLZSVMF
Price:69 Rs(Free for kindle Unlimited)
First Sentence:
How a preson’s life can change in just under two weeks.
Story:
He was an author who had everything going for him. His book sales were going good. He had proposed to his fiance and she had agreed to marry him. He was going to be a dad soon. He was happy.
But little did he know that everything was going to change for him?
Main Characters
Jenny – the girlfriend
Ralphie – A guy
John – A surgeon
My take:
Deprivation was an okayish read for me. I liked the premise of the story. The situation is really scary and it’s ample amount of dark but the writing didn’t do justice to it. I couldn’t feel the fear of the protagonist. I wanted to know why this fate had fallen on him but the reason that’s given,although it is very twisted, but it didn’t satisfy me as a reader. I mean the author is no Stephen king. I don’t know how much an independent author makes but if i have to guess i don’t think it’s worth killing for.
Also, for the antagonist every thing just fell into place a little too easily. There was a lack of struggle between the characters and since protagonist does nothing to avoid his fate, the story has no thrill.I had a feeling there would be some sick twist to the story but there was none. I wish it could have been more thrilling and had more twists.
A good idea but it could have been executed a lot better.
Rating : 2/5
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